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Randall Ramblings – 6 Mar 2016

Another week of winter passed us by, another week of creativity! Hopefully we’ve had the last snow of the year. On Tuesday we received about nine inches but with thirty-five mile per hour winds, we ended up with drifts nearly four feet high. Normally it takes about two hours to completely clear our driveway and the apron. This time it was closer to five. Roll on spring!

Why I want to Write–What’s Led Me to This Stage in My Life

When I’m working on outline for one of my stories, initially I don’t worry about reality. A beginning idea is transformed from a basic plot, who and what, without consideration for where and when.  As I write I’ll jot down a number of potential scenarios, some which may be eliminated later while others become the basis for a specific chapter or thread in the story. 

For example, in ‘The Kurdish Connection’, there is an international team and the Kurds. I wanted someone to monitor activities of several team members.  This led to the creation of a government watcher from one agency, a two-person team from another agency (although that isn’t obvious at first), and a second two-person team supporting the Kurds. The two-person teams were initially identified solely by physical characteristics, Thin Man, Fat Man, Beady Eyes, and Spectacle Man, until eventually their names appeared.

As time goes by, internet and book research is added into the outline, leading to where and when. Some ideas are shelved, but not erased, as I never know when I might want to refer back to something. A general premise is created and I’ll begin work on the first chapter. As a plotter, the outline is a useful tool for me, but it’s always subject to change.

My Work in Progress

Since finishing the first draft of ‘The Kurdish Connection’ I’ve been busy reviewing the various critiques I received and adding recommendations into my manuscript for when I commence editing.  As of today, I’ve gone through the prologue and the first seven chapters.  In a couple of weeks or so, the editing phase will begin.

I also completed and posted the second chapter of ‘A Cartel’s Revenge’ to the two subscription writing sites I use. Excellent feedback for improving my writing and keeping the story pointed in the direction I intend to go.

My brain cells were firing away this week at maximum velocity.  I had always planned for ‘The Kurdish Connection’ to be the first in the Bedlam series. I’m not sure if ‘A Cartel’s Revenge’ will be part of a series or not. 

I’ve now added three additional plots to the Bedlam series and given each one a working title: ‘A Malicious Affiliation’, ‘Carnage in Singapore’, and ‘Ultimate Escalation’. The premise for each will be available next Sunday.

Blog Posts I’d Like to Share

Every week I continue to skim through dozens of blogs, sometimes for enjoyment purposes and other times to help stimulate my creativity. Today, I’d like to share the following blogs with you. Both provide inspirational thought through prose and/or poetry. I hope you’ll find something of interest.

Daily Inspiration – this blog blends writing from different authors and poets and is a good place to lose yourself in a world of inspiration.

A Whispered Wind – the writing of Lori Carlson, a mixture of poetry and prose and well worth a read.

Books I’m Reading

This week I’ve been reading ‘DeathByte’, the sequel to ‘Bloodridge‘ a novel by D.S. Kane. I’m not quite finished, so my thoughts will be provided next time.

Writing Resources

This week I’d like to mention an additional writing resource I’ve acquired to help improve my writing and storytelling. I think the titles capture the purpose of the books very well.

The Emotion Thesaurus – A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression.

Show Don’t Tell – The Ultimate Writer’s Guide.

 

This concludes another week’s ramble.  Hope you found something of interest or at least useful for your own writing.  Until the next time, thank you for reading!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Versatile Blogger Award

It’s hard to believe that just a month ago today, I began creating my blog. Now I have the honor and privilege of being nominated for the Versatile Blogger Award by Amy at Insights From The Edge and Mark at Down Many Roads. I greatly appreciate their kindness and consideration of my humble beginnings for this award.  A big thank you to Amy and Mark.  Please check out their blogs–both are great!

Here are the VBA rules:

 

  • Thank the person who gave you this award.
  •  Include a link to their blog.
  •  Nominate 15 bloggers for the VBA.
  •  Tell the person who nominated you 7 things about yourself.

Seven Things About Myself:

  1. I’ve lived in seven countries.
  2. I’m the eldest of seven children.
  3. I have seven pets (six cats and a boxer).
  4. I was 55 when I retired in 2011.
  5. I have an MBA and a M.S. in Strategic Focus from Heriot-Watt University, Edinburgh, Scotland.
  6. I took my first golf lesson from a Scottish golf pro in 2013.
  7. In addition to writing, I participate in two craft areas–candle making and pyrography.

My nominees for the VBA area, which are based on the quality of their writing, the uniqueness of their subject matter, and the level of love displayed on the virtual page are:

  1. Travel Tales 101
  2. Ann Writes Things
  3. Run and Follow
  4. My Mixed Blog
  5. Little Aya’s Cottage
  6. Journey of a Tired Heart
  7. A Short Conversation
  8. Curiouser and Curiouser
  9. Steve’s Story Place
  10. Fleeting Muse
  11. Mystical Writer
  12. Roam Wild and Free
  13. Catwoods Porch Party
  14. Gerry Wilson
  15. Welcome

Ann and Mark, thank you again for your nominations.

 

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Blogging 101 – Day Twelve

Increasing Your Commenting Confidence

Commenting with confidence is something that can take time. Should you be honest or tell someone what you think they want to hear?

Constrictive criticism is the best way forward. There’s no need to be harsh or sickly sweet. What matters is offering constructive thoughts it there might be something amiss or explain why something grabbed you in a particular way.

In the two writing groups I participate in, I’ve left over 700 inline critiques, meaning every sentence has been examined.  SP&G (spelling and grammar) are just one of the areas we’re asked to check.  Readability, flow, clarity, description, imagery, and engagement some of the other areas we’re asked to review, depending upon a writer’s request.

I’ve yet to find something written that I couldn’t find something positive to comment about and build upon.

With today assignment, I’ve looked back at several who responded to the ‘Learning Style’ prompt.  They all one thing in common: they all tell us a story and give us some insight into the author and how they grasp the world around them.

Here are a couple that I really enjoyed:

https://fleetingmuse.wordpress.com/

https://traveltales101.wordpress.com/

https://ravenwoodspirit.wordpress.com

https://mysticalwriterblog.com/

I hope you enjoy them, too.