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Randall’s Ramblings – 21 Feb 2016

Many thanks to my faithful followers. Your support is greatly appreciated.

Why I want to Write–What’s Led Me to This Stage in My Life

Since 2015, I’ve been learning about fiction–what it is and isn’t.  First thing to go – my reliance on expository writing.  One thing I’ve kept is my use of outlines.  After decades of relying upon an outline when preparing lengthy reports or operating procedures, this became second nature.  Even in my graduate degree programs where the exams were all essay, short outlines were recommended before diving into writing.

I read an article about fiction writing where the types of writers were described:  plotters and pantsers, with a third group who can’t make up their mind and use both methods.  Pantsers, literally writing “by the seat of their pants” have no idea where they’re going or how they’ll get there but this flexibility allows their creativity to burst forward.

Plotters, such as myself, use a systematic approach to their writing.  While this can sometimes be daunting if a change is needed, it’s still a feasible approach.  When I begin writing, I create a general premise for the story. This  provides me a potential starting point and a climax.

Then I begin chapter outlines – nothing complex at first.  Perhaps a timeframe, which major characters will be involved and a line or two about the chapter.  I’ll do this for about ten chapters before I begin writing.
As I complete a chapter, I’ll return to my outline and do two things. First, I’ll look at the next few chapters and adjust as needed, perhaps different characters, more about the chapter content.  I’ll also begin adding more chapters as I described earlier. 
This might sound like a lot of work, but looking back, I’ve spent 2-3 hours per week doing this. Not a great deal of time in the grand scheme of things and works for me.
My Work in Progress
I’m pleased to announce that I’ve completed the first draft of ‘The Kurdish Connection’, with a total of 108,800 words.  Now, the heavy work will begin–rereading the numerous critiques, selecting what works for me, and then making the changes. Sounds easy, but I’ll also be cutting out unnecessary scenes/dialogue, adding bits and pieces and will try to catch all my typos.
In addition to editing, I’ve started on the outline for ‘A Cartel’s Revenge’, using my approach discussed above.  I hope to have the first chapter posted on the subscription websites within a couple of weeks.

Blog Posts I’d Like to Share

Each week I continue to skim through dozens of blogs, sometimes for enjoyment purposes only, and other times to help stimulate my creativity. Today, I’d like to share the following blogs with you. Both use poetry to motivate and inspire others.

A Whispered Wind – great mix of inspiring poetry and awesome photographs.
Giggles & Tales – more inspirational motivational poetry to brighten your day.
Books I’m Reading

This week I read ‘Bloodridge‘ a novel by D.S. Kane.  Here’s my thoughts:

Lies, deceipt, intrigue, love, sorrow, mystery–that just the opening chapters! A great mix of political maneuverings, crosses and double-crosses as our characters race around the world trying to stop a militant group from acquiring weapons of mass destruction and wiping Israel off the map. Alliances forge and fall as countries strive for what is best for themselves. A fast-moving story with something for everyone.

Writing Resources

This week I’d like to mention two addition books I’ll be using as I edit ‘The Kurdish Connection.’

Writing Fight Scenes – step-by-step means to create breathtaking fights.

The Writer’s Guide to Character Emotion – create realistic character expression and emotion.

 

That’s all for this week’s edition of Randall’s Ramblings.  I hope you’ve found something of interest and will join me again soon.  If you think a fellow writer might benefit, please pass the word along.  Likewise, if you think of anything to improve my ramblings, please let me know. Thank you for stopping by!

 

The Kurdish Connection

The Kurdish Connection

This summer I hope to publish ‘The Kurdish Connection.’

Here’s a brief summary about the story:

Iraqi Kurdish freedom fighters have uncovered a cache of chemical weapons left over from the previous regime. Wanting to see a united Kurdistan nation, they offer these weapons to fellow Kurds in Turkey and Syria.

The newly formed Bedlam team is rushed into service to try to head off further regional turmoil by locating and recovering these weapons. However, can they manage to do this while keeping the operation entirely hidden and without igniting further clashes?

Team leader Craig Cameron heads a small international team into the three countries to try to recover these weapons before they cause irreparable harm and lead to an international crisis.

Stayed tuned for updates through my weekly “Randall’s Ramblings” which comes out every Sunday.

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Randall’s Ramblings – 14 February 2016

First, Happy Valentine’s Day to everyone.

Many thanks to those who’ve been reading along.  Your support is greatly appreciated.

Why I want to Write–What’s Led Me to This Stage in My Life

When I retired five years ago, a long-time friend and colleague suggest I try my hand writing a novel. He’d been a follower of my expository writing and it sounded like a good idea.  So, I began to explores ideas for a story.

I was clueless on how to go about this.  I had remembered reading that if you’re uncertain, write about something you know.  That’s easier said than done when you want to switch from expository to fictional writing.  The first thing I did was to create an outline–why? It was a familiar step for me to take.  I planned where I wanted to start and where I hoped to end.  Now, I knew there was a huge area between to create.

I’ve always been an avid reader of authors such as Robert Ludlum, Tom Clancy, Dan Brown, Clive Cussler, and many others.  Putting my thinking cap on, I began to visualize some characters, locations, and dialogue.  What did I know about these components of a story? Absolutely nothing.  It showed.  After nearly 200 pages I came to the conclusion it would be better to put it aside for another day. 

That day came in June 2015.  I was searching the Internet but something totally unrelated and stumbled across a couple of writing sites where I could post my work for critique. An excellent idea, and thoroughly worth the effort. I still have a lot to learn, but I’m enjoying the journey.

My Work in Progress

I posted two chapters for ‘The Kurdish Connection’ this week to the subscription writing sites for critique.  Good feedback from various readers.  I’m now approaching the 100K-word mark as I head into the home stretch. 

I also spent time this week revising my outline, making appropriate changes to fine-tune how the story will end.  This method works well for me and I was able to trim another potential chapter while maintaining everything I want to include.  

Blog Posts I’d Like to Share

Each week I continue to skim through dozens of blogs, sometimes for enjoyment purposes only, and other times to help stimulate my creativity. Today, I’d like to share the following blogs with you. I use one to search for stimulating ideas while the other is great for inspirational thought.

Book Junkie Reviews – As the name implies, this blog provides a host of reviews on various books.  For me it’s a one-stop shop, where just reading reviews of other works gives me inspiration.

Double U – a collection of inspirational poems. There’s sure to be one you’ll enjoy.

Books I’m Reading

I finished reading ‘Dead Charming‘ by Ian Jackson. Here are my thoughts:

We begin with ordinary working people trying to better themselves. Along comes a charming man by the name of Joe Reed. But something sinister lurks beneath the surface.  The beginning of the story can be a bit distressing to some but it’s written to give the reader an inkling of Joe’s mindset.  Yes, there is torture, manipulation, and deceit. Throw in a rookie profiler and several police officers and we’re off to the races.  Is Joe as evil as he appears? If so, why? A great mix of good and evil, with twists thrown in to keep everyone off balance.  A very good read.

Writing Resources

This week I’d like to mention two addition books I’ll be using as I edit ‘The Kurdish Connection.’

Elements of Fiction Writing – Conflict and Suspense – Two important elements of any work of fiction.

How to Write Dazzling Dialogue: The Fastest Way to Improve Any Manuscript – the title speaks for itself.

 

That’s all for this week’s edition of Randall’s Ramblings.  I hope you’ve found something of interest and will return again.  If you think a fellow writer might benefit, please pass the word along.  Likewise, if you think of anything to improve my ramblings, please let me know. Thank you for stopping by!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Randall’s Ramblings – 7 February 2016

I’d like to start out this week’s ramblings wishing my wife, Sylvia, a happy xxth birthday! May you have many more!!   I would also like to thank everyone who has been reading.

Why I want to Write–What’s Led Me to This Stage in My Life

Last week I mentioned some of the college/university courses I had completed and their impact on my writing. As I worked through my studies, successful writing became more crucial. Being able to convey the requisite information in a logical and precise manner was extremely important, especially for timed exams.

After I finished my Associate degree in Business Administration, I moved toward another degree, this time in Business and Management. I was also offered a full-time job based on my military service, and I snapped at the opportunity. Throughout my working career, writing became a vital component, leading to bigger and tougher challenges.  In addition, to expository writing, I was introduced to technical writing.  You could argue that technical writing is a subset of expository, and I would agree with you.  However, it brought along a new set of challenges–learning technical terminology. 

I continued to move up the corporate ladder, so to speak, and increased my formal education with a mid-level leadership program and three graduate degrees.  As time to consider retirement rolled around, a friend and work colleague, whom I have known since 1979, suggested I try my hand at writing a novel.

The results will be explained next time.

My Work in Progress

My brain cells continued to generate thoughts and phrases to help progress ‘The Kurdish Connection’, and I posted chapters 44 and 45 during the past week on the two subscription writing sites I use. The story now stretches about 96K words, with an estimated eight chapters to go for completion of my first draft. Then the ‘fun’ begins–editing, based on the various critiques I’ve received as well as areas I know need to be improved.

I use an outline to keep me on track with where I want the story to go.  Things are shaping up nicely for a final run at the conclusion.  I managed to trim two potential chapters without hurting the story. 

Blog Posts I’d Like to Share

Each week I skim through dozens of blogs, seeking inspiration for my own work.  I find reading other works will stimulate my brain and generate whole passages that I jot down before I forget.  Today, I have two more blogs I’d like to share.  Both use a mixture of photography and prose, looking at everyday things that impact upon us all.

Success Inspirer – inspiration, encourage, and motivation for all. In particular, check out the various tabs: poetry, quotes, inspiration, creative writing, and marriage & family.

The View From My Window -a mixture of stunning photographs and inspirational prose.

Books I’m Reading

Real life events kept me very busy this week so I haven’t been able to read as much for pleasure as normal.  I continued to read ‘Dead Charming’ by Ian Jackson, but I’m not reading to give my impressions just yet.  Hope to have Ian’s book finished shortly.

In the meantime, I’d like to share my thoughts on ‘The DCI Jones Casebook: Ellis Flynn‘ by Kerry Donovan. Another excellent adventure by Kerry. A fantastic read–full of non-stop action from beginning to end. Enjoyed how Flynn and Jenkins kidnap Holly and take her to France. Good detective work led DCI Jones to her potential ‘death bed’ but saves the day, not once, but twice. Good interaction between Jones and the French authorities. What a bunch of losers Jones works for. Great twist having Jenkins follow Holly back to England and set up for her kidnapping from the hospital.

Writing Resources

This week I’d like to mention two books I’ll be using as I edit ‘The Kurdish Connection.’

Dialogue: More Than Just Talk – Learn what dialogue can and should be doing for your book.

Dialogue Tips & Traps: A Guide For Fiction Writers –  Insights, strategies, tricks, and best practices about the writing of dialogue in fiction.

That’s all for this edition of Randall’s Ramblings.  I hope you’ve found something of interest and will return again.  If you think a fellow writer might benefit, please pass the word along.  Likewise, if you think of anything to improve my ramblings, please let me know. Thank you for stopping by!

 

 

 

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Blogging 101 – Day Fifteen

Randall’s Ramblings

Introducing my upcoming weekly blog post, Randall’s Ramblings, which will commence this Sunday, January 24, 2016. Topics will be related to writing in some way, shape, or form, but I’m open to all suggestions.

At present, I plan to include the following:

  1. Status of my personal works in progress.
  2. Snippets on why I want to write and what’s led me to this stage in my life.
  3. Blogs posts I’ve checked out and want to share.
  4. Books I’m reading.
  5. Authors I’ve found.
  6. Any new writing resources I’ve found or been introduced to.
  7. Anything else I can think of.

In addition to being posted here, it will also be posted on my Twitter and LinkedIn accounts (FB too, once that’s back up and running).

Hope you’ll join me.  Your blog could be on my list:)

 

 

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Blogging 101 – Day Eleven

What’s My Learning Style?

I learned in college that I preferred interactive small groups or one-on-one settings. When the opportunity arose for course projects that required groups, it wasn’t surprising that I gravitated to like-minded individuals, and vice versa. Although in hindsight, it started much earlier.

While I can retain information through nearly every possibly means, something that allows me to visualize or read works best. When I was in high school, I wanted to take a speed reading course.  Within the first thirty minutes of the start of the class, I was back in the admin office, searching for a new class.  Why? Because the class wasn’t going to help me–not my thinking, but the teacher’s.

The objective of the course was to be able to read 1,000 words a minute with at least ninety percent accuracy.  We were tested to determine our speed reading ability–I read 990 words a minute and had ninety-five percent accuracy. I ended up in a bookkeeping class.

Shortly after I met my wife, she asked me to read a two-page letter she had received.  I glanced at it and handed it back.  Boy, was she mad!  She thought I wasn’t interested in helping her respond to the letter.  She changed her mind when I was able to tell her what was each paragraph–not verbatim, but the gist of every one.

As I mentioned earlier, I can also learn one-on-one.  When I attended the Washington Language Center in the mid-80s, I was surprised to learn I was the sole Turkish language student for that year.  While it was tough being the only student, I did well. Onun icin Turkcem fena degil (as a result my Turkish isn’t bad), thirty years later.

As I progressed through my professional life, learning was a constant requirement. I attained a MBA and a Master of Science in Strategic Focus, both from Heriot-Watt University, Edinburgh, Scotland.  I have no idea what the campus looks like–I never stepped foot on it.  Both degrees were done entirely through distance education, with proctors monitoring my exams.

When I watch the news, I find listening to the “talking heads” usually a slow and painful process.  It amazes my wife that I’ll watch the news with the sound off, but in reality I’m reading the text scrolling across the bottom.  When it becomes repetitive I switch news channels or move onto something else.

I still read–a lot.  Between the two online writing groups I participate in, I’m reading 50-60 novels at one time, moving between books, chapter by chapter. Not only does this provide me an opportunity to assist others with their writing, it also helps mine and aids in generating ideas when my brain cells are on empty or just too stubborn to work.

So how do you learn?

 

Blogging 101, Writing Muses

Found My Publicist

I’ve spent most of today either checking out blogs or working on The Kurdish Connection. When I went into my email, there was a notification that I had received a new critique on chapter 37.  Opening it up, I couldn’t believe what was written. The guy has given me good feedback before, but I think I need to hire him as my publicist. According to his profile, he’s retired from advertising after a forty year career.

Below is his critique.  I’m sure you’ll understand why I need to hire this guy:)

“This is getting boring. I am waiting for Randy to write a chapter that I can dislike. NO ! another ground breaking chapter. I love the way that the plot draws you in and it seems as though the reader is a fly on the wall able to see, hear and understand each characters’ thoughts and behaviour. The timeline is self evident and in view of current world events it is a story that is totally up to date. I have known military personnel , I have listened to their stories of real life events and blow me, Randy must have been in the thick of it.

The characters, events and actions are as real as life and very, very believable . I cannot praise this work too highly and I believe that all of Randy’s writing is becoming addictive, especially for me and I feel that many others will agree with me.

Finally, I have never been that far east, but with the descriptions in the story, I feel as though I have been there.

Keep up the excellent work Randy, you have a dedicated fan of your work and I won’t be the only one, trust me.”

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Blogging 101 – Day Nine

Another interesting assignment but in some ways a tough one because there are so many talented people posting articles that inspire, teach, provide a story, and give us pause for thought.  In yesterday’s blog I listed five that caught my attention, but I could easily have listed 15-20 blogs without blinking. 

In keeping with today’s assignment, I’m referring back to one from yesterday’s list. It’s an article titled, “Writing a Story Inspired by a Dream.” which can be found on https://wwannwrites.wordpress.com

Ann talks about how dreams inspire her writing, whether shared through a story, a novel, or just a tweet.

So what inspires me to write?  It varies–I don’t think dreams have helped me thus far, but it’s likely they have by resurfacing later. Sometimes I’m inspired by my surroundings, other times through reading and conversations.

Case in point.  Last year I joined a website to work with other aspiring writers to improve my writing skills (thenextbigwriter.com). Shortly after I joined, a writing contest was announced–seemed simple, use the word apple at least once and keep the submission to exactly 99 words.  We have an apple tree, so I stood and looked out the window for a few minutes.  Words seemed to flow to me and within no time at all, I had my 99 words. They’re posted on my blog, under short stories (can’t get much shorter, I don’t think).

The next context they announced was about creating a superhero.  I thought, science fiction, not really for me, although there are a number of SF authors I’ll read.  The deadline was about 45 days away.  Didn’t give it another thought, until one afternoon, my neighbor’s father stopped by to say hello.  He did this from time to time and we always had a good chat.  No exception on this day and he was telling me about some of the things the people working for him experience while delivering the mail (he’s the post master).

That evening, I took a look at the criteria for the superhero contest. The idea came to me, write a different type of story about an ordinary hero.  Postal Man was created (also posted under short stories). Based on the feedback I received, I’ll be working this into a children/young adult novel, The Adventures of Postal Man.

The first novel I’m working on, The Kurdish Connection, is loosely based on real world events, augmented by some of my travels and experiences, as well as feedback from reviewers.  Earlier this week, I posted chapter 38 on thenextbigwriter.com and scribophile.com for review. Several readers are already waiting for the next chapter:)

In an earlier blog post I mentioned one of my readers sent me three sentences that she thought would make a good story.  I agree, and you can find the premise for A Cartel’s Revenge linked under novels.

As I mentioned at the beginning of this article, there are many things that give me reason to use my brain and see how I can craft something.  One day, perhaps I’ll be published. If not, it won’t be from lack of trying.  To sum up in one word what inspires me–life.

Look around you–something will always inspire you.

Blogging 101

Blogging 101 – Day Five

Good morning/afternoon everyone,

Woke up to brief glimpses of red as the sun tried to poke above the horizon. Didn’t last long as clouds have rolled in. At least it’s warmer 32F/0C. Took Tyson out on his leash this morning, good thing, too. About 20 feet from the front door stood a large doe. Tyson tried to chase but couldn’t as the deer scampered away.

I tried a few more themes last night but so far I’m satisfied with what I have, although that can always change. When I first set my blog up last week, I tried around 20 different themes before going with TwentyTwelve. I don’t want a busy background as I think that my distract readers from the written word.

I’ve added another snippet to Morsels from The Kurdish Connection, my current novel in progress. Today I’ve added a bit from chapter two. Hope you’ll stop by for a read. If you do, please remember these are only snippets so there might be some gaps in the story’s flow. Beginning tomorrow, I’ll try to add in a few photos for local color.

Many thanks, Randy

 

Blogging 101, Morsels From The Kurdish Connection

Morsels From The Kurdish Connection

Someone on Blogging 101 suggested I add some snippets from my chapters–an excellent idea!  I’ll post things that my reviewers have particularly liked, so it will vary from scenery, character, and perhaps a bit of the dialogue.

What is The Kurdish Connection About?

Iraqi Kurdish freedom fighters have uncovered a cache of chemical weapons left over from the previous regime. Wanting to see a united Kurdistan nation, they offer these weapons to fellow Kurds in Turkey and Syria. The newly formed Bedlam Alpha team is rushed into service to head off further regional turmoil by locating and recovering these weapons. However, can they manage to do this while keeping the operation entirely hidden and without igniting further clashes? Team leader Cameron Craig MacTavish heads a small international team into the three countries to try to recover these weapons before they cause irreparable harm.

Prologue (will eventually be part of Chapter 1)

The softening of Halabja ended.

A cacophony of sound burst over the city—jet engines and a strange whistling sound like metal falling onto the ground. “Gas,” someone shouted. People panicked, trampling one another to find a place to shelter.

The aroma of sweet apples and the pungent odor of rotten eggs spread across the city. Birds began falling from the sky, small animals and later larger ones, sank to the ground. Nothing and no one was spared—humans collapsed, never to move again.

 Chapter 1

Dersim kept a safe distance from the exposed artillery shell he’d found the day before. Once past, he stopped to pull his tattered coat tighter around his slender body.  Although the morning was bright and sunny, the wind brought chilly air and a hint of rain from the nearby mountains.

Dersim and Hawre began loading Dersim’s dilapidated Turkish BMC truck with salvage they’d recovered during the previous three days, mainly metal: lead, steel, iron, and on a rare occasion, copper. The truck sagged on broken springs. Cracks spider-webbed the windshield, and the paintwork was so faded it was difficult to recognize any of the original colors.

“You must swear by Allah never to say a word of what I’m going to tell you. If you promise, come see me. Now. At my house. … Swear by Allah, disaster could occur. This is the most important secret.”

Chapter 2

Easing the vehicle back onto the road, Dersim continued his journey, albeit a bit slower. He ate a couple of green apples as he sang a song made famous by the Kurdish musician, Ali Merdann. Dersim knew most of Merdan’s songs, but Xalan forbade him singing in the house.

“Dersim, I realize you like to sing, and I like music,” Xalan said on several occasions. “But your voice… is not so nice.”

Babir unlocked the front door.  They wove through narrow aisles stuffed with a hodgepodge of bins and barrels containing Iranian pistachios, dried hot peppers, various spices, and dried fruits. The aroma of garlic, saffron, and mint floated through the air.

“We need to help all Kurdish people, not just the ones in Iraq,” Dersim said.

 “Yes,” Babir said. “We all believe that one day there will be a sovereign Kurdistan.  Only one person can make it happen—Abdullah Öcalan.”

“But he’s in a Turkish prison,” Ismet said.

“That’s true,” Babir replied. “However, the Council will guide us. They want him released as well.  There isn’t anyone better suited to unify Kurdistan.  When I return to Zakho, I’ll talk to Mullah Mala. He’ll know what to do. I’ll call you when the meeting is arranged.”

Chapter 3

Dersim carefully drove along one of the cobbled streets into the bazaar. Every driver had to be on alert; children ran everywhere while goats and sheep wandered aimlessly. The bazaar was alive with a cacophony of sound: horns blaring, vendors hawking their wares, and radios playing. Bright-colored canopies created shade for the various stalls, while along the edge of the bazaar, old, wood buildings stood like sentries. Some buildings were newly painted in pastel colors while others were in need of serious repairs.

Mullah Ahmed raised his hands to stop the chatter. He turned to Dersim. “Where is Ismet? I thought he’d be here, too.”

Dersim looked at him with a puzzled expression. I thought you gave instructions for Ismet to go to Syria. Why the question?

As Mullah Ahmed stared at Dersim, he realized the mullah was putting on an act. He was uncertain what the mullah was up to, but decided to go along, for now.

Mufti Tanreveri’s eyes narrowed as he intensely surveyed each man in the room. He proclaimed: “Our first objective remains to free Öcalan.  Under his guidance, we can proceed to our final objective, a united Kurdistan, even if it means war.”

Chapter 4

CC, woke to the William Tell Overture ringing near his ear.  He rolled over and scooped up his smartphone. “Yeah?”

“Confirm full name,” a lifeless voice said.

“Cameron Craig MacTavish.”

“Code phrase.”

“Tatties, neeps, and haggis.”

“Identity confirmed. Proceed immediately to Bedlam.” The line went dead.

CC realized, after a few hours of deliberation, that he missed the excitement and danger of Army life. He had been deployed undercover to Somalia, Afghanistan, and Iraq. His fifteen years of action, training, and more action had left him an adrenaline junkie, hooked as bad as any addict on skid row. No wife, no kids to worry about. He called the general. “If the offer’s still on the table, I’m in.”

Chapter 5

“Unfortunately, we think there are some leaks in the system. Unrelated information that should be kept within the IC is showing up through foreign sources where we wouldn’t expect to see it.  Until I’m convinced this is a coincidence and not coming from a hidden mole, I want to keep your operation to a very strict need-to-know basis.”

“Admiral, what’s in nine days?” Jake asked before anyone else could respond.

“March 16th—Halabja Day, the day all Kurds commemorate Saddam’s bombardment of the city with chemical weapons.”

Complete silence enveloped the room. Even the clock stopped ticking as if it understood the admiral’s announcement.

CC tossed and turned as his mind kept going over the day’s events.  He thought about other missions and the men he had lost. It dawned on him that this deployment was no different, just a smaller team.  Dear God, help me do the right things at the right time to lead this team and keep them from harm. Protect them from the perils we could face and guide us to a successful outcome. Amen.

Chapter 6

The taxi weaved across every lane of traffic and even onto the sidewalk to avoid several sheep. Jake, sitting in front, closed his eyes and prayed the journey would be over soon. A few minutes later, the taxi slid to a stop in front of the hotel.  Wide-eyed passengers bailed out, thankful to be alive. Jake took it in stride, having lived in Baghdad before, but he too was glad when they safely arrived at their destination.

Alpha this is Aussie.

Made it. Shaken and stirred.

Alpha this is Kiwi.

In position—Baggage missing in action. ETA two to three days.

As Ben shut down his computer, a huge explosion shattered windows and rocked the building. The lights dimmed, then glowed so brightly Ben thought they would explode, and then everything went dark.

“What the hell was that?

Chapter Seven

The officer reviewed the document, handed it back to Dersim, and climbed into the truck. Suddenly they heard the squeal of air brakes as a double tractor-trailer careened around the curve, the driver trying to avoid the stopped vehicles and the spilled load. The tractor tipped precariously as it swung outward until the tires gained a purchase on stretch of dry road—the trailers’ weight helping to pull it back down. The behemoth came to rest with its bumper kissing the back of Dersim’s truck.

He slammed on his brakes but hit a patch of fuel and went into a skid.  The police officer, eyes wide, froze in place as the truck headed toward him. Dersim tightened his hold on the steering wheel until his knuckles turned white.  He pumped the brakes and downshifted.  The truck’s tires gripped the asphalt and came to a stop inches from the petrified police officer. 

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